One swift smack
and I gush hot
pushing up
into the hand
crying out
wanting more
slow slaps
and my legs
are pools
of steaming
liquid
jello
one more, again
my skin
burns like
wood on a fire
I open
to the heat
and then
the push
push in
in harder
harder
and deeper
full, oh
full
oh
oh
Monday, May 14, 2007
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9 comments:
I love it!!
nice job
E
Very lovely.
Thank you. I actually am a poet, but haven't written very much erotic poetry. This came effortlessly. The best kind.
Eve
I would love to see your poetry, even non erotic.
Thanks, E. I think that's for another blog, though. :)
Eve
Eve!
Wow. That was truly lovely. Nice cadence too.
Hugs,
rg
Thanks, rg. I'm honored. I admire your writing so much. I appreciate your compliment.
Eve
Right there, is an encapsulated moment...
a breathless one,
and, yes:
lovely.
Cheers! (Keep writing poetry. I love it)
xx,res~~(still reading. Stay tuned)
Thanks, Res. It's good to hear from you and to know you haven't dropped off completely.
Eve
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