Monday, May 14, 2007

One more, again

One swift smack
and I gush hot
pushing up
into the hand
crying out
wanting more

slow slaps
and my legs
are pools
of steaming
liquid
jello

one more, again
my skin
burns like
wood on a fire
I open
to the heat

and then
the push
push in
in harder
harder
and deeper
full, oh
full
oh
oh

9 comments:

Edwardotk said...

I love it!!

nice job

E

Shon Richards said...

Very lovely.

Eve in Chains said...

Thank you. I actually am a poet, but haven't written very much erotic poetry. This came effortlessly. The best kind.

Eve

edwardotk said...

I would love to see your poetry, even non erotic.

Eve in Chains said...

Thanks, E. I think that's for another blog, though. :)

Eve

Remittance Girl said...

Eve!

Wow. That was truly lovely. Nice cadence too.

Hugs,

rg

Eve in Chains said...

Thanks, rg. I'm honored. I admire your writing so much. I appreciate your compliment.

Eve

Res said...

Right there, is an encapsulated moment...

a breathless one,

and, yes:

lovely.

Cheers! (Keep writing poetry. I love it)

xx,res~~(still reading. Stay tuned)

Eve in Chains said...

Thanks, Res. It's good to hear from you and to know you haven't dropped off completely.

Eve